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Music is good for body, mind and soul. According to Elizabeth Scott the author of “ How and why is music a good tool for health?’’ Researchers have study that music can help patient threat depression, stress level and cancer patient have seen the benefit in it by using music as a therapy . in the article the author also mention that music can help synchronize brain waves to improve concentration I agree because high beat can sharpen your concentration not only to adult but too children as well

An example Baby Einstein is a private organization that provide different validity of educational program specific to babies and toddler. one of the program uses classical music such melodies tones of Beethoven Mozart and various number of different type to develop their brains become attentive to their surrounding and become smarter . the program teaches them the different type of facial expression we can show by the beat of the tones , learn the sound of nature such rain fall , rain forest , ect . i Have work with children for five years and notice that chidren learn faster and remeber better when their sing song or listen in songs. the differnt type of beats use in song for this spesific age of children are medium beat that improve thier brain waves and also help them calm down to sleep better . another benifict music has on children is the earlier your brain develop the more likely to have highter iq and be talented

in conclusion the benifit of music for you can be forever . music is not just an enetertaiment but a tool that can make you smarter .

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reminder to self




1 rest well the day before the test come 15 minutes earlier to class in case of any scenario . Don’t forget to bring western dictionary and extra pens and paper to draft the essay. REMEMBER to read the passage twice if you have to read it once more. Look for the main idea usually is in the first sentences in the introduction. look out for the main points in the passage and pick one to write about ( choice the one you can give a good example) . Stay away from facts (if it has too much detail like numbers and too much words is a fact ). Make an outline to organize your thought free write if you have to but remember you have 60 minute only to complete the essay . write a topic sentence for the introduction write brief and detail summary of the passage including the main idea and the main point you choice to write about , add the name of the author and quote the name of the article . Remember to said if you agree or disagree with the idea . for the body choice an idea that you can easily relate write about a personal experience or something you read in the newspaper , magazine or you hear in the news . Be VERRY SPESIFIC add numbers of details don’t forget to do that.

2 spelling and grammar watch out don t forget to revise the essay over and over again to check for misspell. Use words that you won’t miss spell use the dictionary at all times. Make sure that the paragraphs are well written the intro has main point summery of the article and the main idea with the point you choice to write about. That the body has everything that need to have, clear example with the detail of it how is it relatable to the article. Stick to one idea don’t jump to another because it would make you essay UN clear to read. The idea are well written be very specific again don’t live out any details. if you get stock go back to the outline and write in the draft what idea come out and then go back to writing the essay remember to finish 15 to 20 minute to re-read the essay . don’t get nervous and get scared force yourself to write the outline use the example you choice only . The conclusion is just three sentence long just re stating the main idea.


3 stay focus in the essay don’t worry about the time but keep in mind you are in time limit .whenever you don’t know what to write clear you thought and continue writing if your using the same words remember you have the dictionary to look for another one

the power of music is endless acouring to elizabeth scott the author of the article " how and why is music a good tool for health " music can have a great efffect to your boddy . it can help stimulate your brain wave , relise stress level that can help improve your life, by the levels of the beats in the music . in the article as it mention on the study made in lab the brain stimulation resive by music can have a great future outcome in your life .

one example it can help children starting from a young age to be smarter the program '' Baby einstain'' is a private organization that introduces music of such as Bethoben Mozart and many number to baby and toddler to help their brains and become more attentive curious ans think fast . one of the show from the program uses instrument like the piano to express different number of emotion we can show , the sound of nature as well rock songs put in lolybies to help them sleep

also many students often use music to help them concenntrate in their study acouring in their reserch fast beat song stimulate brain waves to do tat

another example depending on the type of music it can make you a possitive person . growing in corona queens many peolple who often listen to fast beat songss i would knowest that their were always in a happy mood and when face with obstacle they were able to solve them and come out of them easily . althought i never listen to it in my house y neighboor he was a possitive man dispite he live alone .

music has many benefits that cam alternate your life in many ways .

baby gone

In the movie gone baby gone the main characters bring out the question what morally correct or not the philosophy of all them is divide it in two consequentialism and ethical absolutism . patrick the protogonigst belive in following the ethical morality is the best way to aways go regarless of what the action and the long term consequence may be. his belive are form beacuse of his childhood as in the begigng of the movie he mentions what a priest told him to always do what right even if it doesnt seem . trou out the movie he is involve in senario that question his belive on example when he shoots the child molester in the herad althought for many of others that was correct for him seem to be wrong he says killing is a sin wether or not . althought it lead him to find the girl Amanda his again place in this senario when he decide to ruturn the child to her mother although she was in beetter envierment than been with her mother who is an alcholic drug addict .

however the other charecter Angie, police captain, lionel , renny their action lead them to believe in consequentialism to do the right decision doesn t mean to do what moraly correct . In their intention to look for what was best for Amanda they believe it was ok to cover taht fact her kidnap was a fraoud . and live away from her mother . Angie an the police captain are left in dispointment when she is brought to her mother . one examle is when angie confront patric and tell him she is better of lving with the captain becaue she would have birthday parties slepover like normal girl this point is brought with the irony tht the police captain was supoosetly the one in charge of the case

in my opinion i disagree with the endng i would have left the child with the new place and have shown the mother were she was insted of caling the cops nd brought her back to the envierment she was in the beginging . althought it was the morally correct it was not the best decsion . at the end helen the mother is living the child an attendent to go out with somebody .

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IS there equal opportunities for all ? the article ‘’An education in citizenship “ by the Chicago Tribute (editorial 31 march ,2003 ) stated the question .Acouring to the article the Illinois House r passed a bill to allow iligal young people to pay in state tution rates at the Illinois colleges and universities I agree with thee proposal because for many of them their main priority is to resive a highter education .


Advocate for immigrant estimate there are 3000 youth in illinous who are in this position . in which there were born I n another country but raise in the USA the tuition fee shouldn’t be as an outside state ($13.906) because as the advocate for immigrant stated their parents paid federal taxes . the true of the matter is the cost of a highter education is not about money but the hard effort everybody put to be able to achive their goal to become somebody .

Another example is the bill resive 112 -4 votes to passed it in that most senators didn’t had problem to decide althought the bill have a lot of pros and cons the dilemma have been brought to the atteintion of the representive by the continuously protest young people who are illegal immigrant to make the bill pass

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Are advertisement company slowly controling your thought? acouring to kelle lans from hype insigns of life in the usa prove this point. As we growth in technology advertisement are spreading everywhere you go .. there is an estimate of 12 billion displayed ads , 3 billion in radio comercial and more than 200, 00 tv commercial in the usa . I agree with Mrs Lans point because of the effect it has on our decition and the effect it has on childre.

Our desition are affect it by what we see mostly . since we are living an advance technology century places like supermarkets ,bank machines and highways are fill wih many of this manipulated strageries to sell their products. one example a company call carte display to screeen on the supermarkets carts to promote more shopping.

Another effect is on childrens programs are fill with catchies songs and atractive product like race cars jumping in high lenth or most popular the oscar mayer song theme there are being raise by television , children are more easly influencer creating a chain conection to increase the percesnt of consuming in this country


in conclusion adverticement company have take over what we decide to b uy .

hype

The article Hype by Kalle Lars discuss how adverstasment are contaminating our mind . A clear example is local supermarkets have install screen in their shopping carts , as well the nozzle in gas station have now adverising screen . acoring to the article there total amount of adverticent on tv and display is 203,0000 billion every year . we are living in just a century ago children would listen to cassical music as a sothing background nowaday children are fill with advertice jingle likethe mike miyer wiiner song